Deeper Mind

This is a great prototype - loved the concept of having to go into the mind of the person sitting next to you, but needs a lot of work for it to become something that rises above the rest. 

A few notes:

The radio announcer should have subtitles, as the voice is pretty low compared to everything else. Walking through the woods started to feel a little forced, as there didn't appear to be a clear direction of where to go. Perhaps this part could be filtered with thoughts from Richie's mind, why he did what he did - we are in his subconscious after all, aren't we?

The second sequence could have more puzzle-type elements involved in it, rather than carrying out a few chores, but overall would like to see this expanded upon and have a cohesive storyline behind it, I think this could go far... 

Really nice and interesting game, especially for an entry to the beginners jam.

Best wishes, here is my German playthrough.

good prototype

For what this was it was pretty solid! Made a video on it.

Nice very good game i didn't expect to see Gavin reed and other person don't remember the name the from both Detroit game anyway good game well done!

Very well done. it gives a feeling that somewhere is always there with you. The jump scare is so unexpected really good.

great game!